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Post by Admin - AutisAwsome on Sat May 07, 2016 12:00 pm









seriously WHAT THE HELL?! Evil or Very Mad They have some balls to criticise my writing like this if THIS is the kind of thing that gets FEATURED on their website! It's not that they didn't like my story. I'm OK with that but its the fact they kept criticising it about things 1) claiming it did things that it actually didn't 2) they clearly didn't even read it 3) They only judged it by the subject matter without even bothering to look further into it GAH! It just makes me rage! Evil or Very Mad What do you guys think? Has something like this happened to you? Let me know!

Also, am I the only one who reads the description for some stories and I just laugh because they sound just so overly pretentious or ridiculous? I probably shouldn't because the story could be fantastic but sometimes you just...oh dear...you know?



here is an example. They are trying to do that thing were you point out something obvious to artistic effect but...it just doesn't come off well

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Post by Jay'98 on Sat May 07, 2016 12:24 pm

ponies be hypocrites
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Post by Sakura on Sat May 07, 2016 5:54 pm

true
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Post by Wish on Mon May 09, 2016 4:03 am

Admin - AutisAwsome wrote:
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Post by S3O on Mon May 09, 2016 5:46 am

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Post by Blang on Mon May 09, 2016 7:47 am

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Post by Admin - AutisAwsome on Mon May 09, 2016 2:31 pm

I don't get it. How is that look anything like this


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Post by PeteyWave on Mon May 16, 2016 2:56 am

observe
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Post by Admin - AutisAwsome on Mon May 16, 2016 11:03 am

I don't even

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Post by Jay'98 on Wed May 18, 2016 9:32 am

PeteyWave wrote:observe
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i don't either
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Post by Bombie on Thu May 19, 2016 4:09 am

she's my favorite pengling
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Post by Jay'98 on Thu May 19, 2016 4:22 am

i prefer pengwings
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Post by Bombie on Thu May 19, 2016 4:25 am

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Post by Admin - AutisAwsome on Thu May 19, 2016 10:37 am

Jay'98 wrote:i prefer pengwings

Bombie wrote:fried and made into a soup


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Post by Jay'98 on Thu May 19, 2016 12:49 pm

sad pengwong
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Post by Bombie on Sat May 21, 2016 12:36 pm



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Post by Jay'98 on Sat May 21, 2016 12:38 pm

no this is pengwrong

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Post by Bombie on Sat May 21, 2016 12:47 pm

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Post by Jay'98 on Sat May 21, 2016 12:50 pm

pikachu

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Post by Bombie on Sat May 21, 2016 1:52 pm

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Post by Admin - AutisAwsome on Sat May 21, 2016 4:24 pm

never evolve your pokemon its torture. join the pokemons non-evolve society. Here's a crying pikachu



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Post by Jay'98 on Sat May 21, 2016 4:25 pm

you join your baby corp
i'm gonna hardcore venusaur
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Post by Admin - AutisAwsome on Sat May 21, 2016 5:13 pm

Jay'98 wrote:you join your baby corp
i'm gonna hardcore venusaur



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