What are you writing critiques and do you agree? plus, protentious writing

seriously WHAT THE HELL?! They have some balls to criticise my writing like this if THIS is the kind of thing that gets FEATURED on their website! It's not that they didn't like my story. I'm OK with that but its the fact they kept criticising it about things 1) claiming it did things that it actually didn't 2) they clearly didn't even read it 3) They only judged it by the subject matter without even bothering to look further into it GAH! It just makes me rage! What do you guys think? Has something like this happened to you? Let me know!

Also, am I the only one who reads the description for some stories and I just laugh because they sound just so overly pretentious or ridiculous? I probably shouldn't because the story could be fantastic but sometimes you just...oh dear...you know?



here is an example. They are trying to do that thing were you point out something obvious to artistic effect but...it just doesn't come off well

ponies be hypocrites

true

favorite penguin

lol
it is a penguin

I don't get it. How is that look anything like this

observe
a sea horse

I don't even

PeteyWave wrote:observe
a sea horse

i don't either

she's my favorite pengling

i prefer pengwings

fried and made into a soup

sad pengwong

"pengwrong"

no this is pengwrong

that's a freaking pokemon

no i have a use for this mote

never evolve your pokemon its torture. join the pokemons non-evolve society. Here's a crying pikachu



now pay us so we can pay them less than you gave us

you join your baby corp
i'm gonna hardcore venusaur